2010-05-18 [Chel.]: I think you are really going in a good direction with how the neck is rendered. I think if you did this again to the face plates, it would look awesome.
I think the background needs to be a bit smoothed out to make the figure pop too.

Other then that, it's really weird(in a good way). Again, I love how the neck is rendered, specifically those two metal pole things on the sides of the neck with the rims around them. :)

2010-05-19 [NOOOPE]: I like the roughness, personally. It gives it a quick spontaneous feel like a figure study. But it's a robot... which makes it rock. The face area seems a wee flat though.

2010-05-19 [arthemis_]: The neck is the best part of this picture. I love the lines for the head, but maybe it needs a bit of shading too. I'm not a robot person, I've no idea to make the material pop out more. Maybe if you get rid of the halo around the face? I don't know. I admire the shading on the lower part, it's amazing!

2010-05-20 [The Dizzy Raven]: The shading is magnificent!!!!! What was your inspiration?

2010-05-20 [Pnelma Tirian]: boredom, mostly XD I wanted to draw something complex but not complicated, like a human face would be.

2010-05-20 [Falx]: I like the detail work on the neck. What medium did you use?

2010-05-20 [Pnelma Tirian]: graphite. I think it was a lead pencil. XD

2010-05-20 [Falx]: Wow! Double grats then. I know how hard it is to make pencils make things look metallic and shiny.

2010-05-20 [pegasus1000]: Good start to a great android.

2010-05-20 [The Dizzy Raven]: Haha ^_^ I understand you there. Sometimes, artists create the most fantastic things out of boredom. It works that way a lot

2010-06-12 [Chel.]: I love the pose.... and the wings in front being in a lot of dimension. :3
I don't really have any constructive crit...other then I would love to see color on this thing!

2010-06-12 [arthemis_]: I love the abs, I love the pose. I am not such fan of the aureole thing as it's too Christian-ish for me. Also it seems that the wings in front could use a little more shading work. Great concept, don't quite like the text.

2010-06-13 [pegasus1000]: The realistic aspect of the abs and arms are a weird contrast to the cartoonish face and sketchy wings. I would love to see you put more work into the wings and bring them up to the quality of the body (Especially the lower wings) There is a lot of potential for this picture and I hope you keep working on it.

2010-06-16 [Pnelma Tirian]: I definitely will. Thanks for the critique, guys! Yeah, I definitely know the inner workings of a torso better than I do of wings.

2010-06-16 [Yncke]: I think it looks great, lovely atmosphere! One remark is the light falling down from the signs is a bit odd. Those pyramids of light can come from lanterns with the top part capped, but a lantern like that shines in all directions.

2010-06-16 [Chel.]: Not bad for a first time night scene. I really get the cool atmosphere with the sky and trees. However, I just think that the grass should be darkened as well(except for the streetlight area of course)

2010-06-16 [arthemis_]: I'm not a fan of the trees, they look a bit small to me, but everything else is simply awesome! You're a great artist :D

2010-06-19 [pegasus1000]: My first thought was of the wizard of oz... But then again; perhaps not. I like the boxy feel. I would also like to see the trees a little taller.

2010-06-19 [Pnelma Tirian]: yeah, that makes sense. Now that I look at it, most forests are taller than that! ^_^;; I'll definitely have a go at growing them a little taller. Thanks so much!

2010-06-19 [Falx]: It's the paper bag knight! I don't know really what to put here, aside from that I had an odd desire to own a doll of the guy leaning against the lamp post. It's really good for your first shot at a night scene. I love the ambiance of this picture!

2010-06-27 [Chel.]: I love how you used whatever brush you used. Generally it's a tad blurry but tightens up in spots when needed. <3

2010-06-27 [arthemis_]: I like it! It's really cool, conceptual and I like the composition. Another example of how a quick sketch can turn into something great with a promise to even more greatness!

2010-06-30 [NOOOPE]: I really like the light in this. Things have this really curious glow. However, I don't think you needa force subject matter into this. You didn't need to make it a space battle. I actually think making it something recognizable detracts from it's cool abstract quality. Straight up abstraction can be just as cool as anything else. Don't let it's "fine art" baggage scare you away from experimenting with it. I do really like that ship in the front though...

2010-07-13 [Aeolynn]: It seem very fleshy for a spaceship, but the overall theme of pink/red, purple and blue is very nice

2010-08-28 [Pnelma Tirian]: new :3

2010-08-28 [Chel.]: I love the mouth! The tufts of hair really creep me out... >_>

2010-08-29 [Pnelma Tirian]: haha, yeah, I love her grungy stupid haircut XD

2010-08-29 [Falx]: That is frickin' creepy. She kind of looks like she's in pain or about to cry. The mandibles in the jaw look really good.

2010-08-30 [pegasus1000]: I like how the ears seem chewed

2010-10-01 [Ravendust]: Intriguing piece for sure, its well drawn, Pnelma :)

2011-08-10 [Eyonic]: omg...so many eyes! it sees everything o.o scary

2011-08-13 [The Dizzy Raven]: It's creepy and awesome!!! :D I <3 creepy!!!

2011-10-26 [pegasus1000]: Still awesomely creepy...